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©2003-2009 ~martman
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This is my room and that’s my nice big telly and my Gamecube. My favourite part is the computer but people say the beds cool (I think it looks like the sea :) ).
I had to re-submit this because the first one wasn't working properly [link]

I want everyone who views this to leave a comment please to each help me get a little bit better or at least stop me from making mistakes. I hope I get as many views on this as the original! constructive criticism welcome :)

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:iconzoanoid:
Sweet job. The thing I like most about this pic is that you kept everything on the same scale, which is pretty hard to do. Though, the bed might be a bit to big, but maybe you just have a big bed ;)
:iconpdavda:
Cool! thats really good - it looks a lot like your room but tidy lol ;). I like it and the person above me is right - you have kept it to scale, the only problem with it is that one of your walls is empty - but thats because you wanted to keep it plain and simple - good work though, they're a lot of detail there and the scale is good.
:iconpdavda:
Oh cool! I just noticed the bed and the sheet has a shadow and has a 'wave' in it, nice shading on the bed as well.
:iconpdavda:
Oh yeah, mart - you forgot your light switch lol
:iconarmaankhan:
This is a great piece of art, mart. I'd love to provide constructive criticism, but I don't see how you could improve it--it's excellent as it is. It would be neat to see an animation with your avatar doing stuff in the room, like playing Prince of Persia on the Gamecube.
:iconthemozack:
Neat! There's plenty of tiny details that made me want to have a close look at it, and the shading and folds on the bed are very nice touches. Great job! :)

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:iconmartman:
Cool idea, I think I just might do that, but since I have never played prince of persia i think it will be... Eternal darkness :) cant wait to start on it!! i wont forget to mention you in the description.

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If your interested in time travel, meet me last Thursday!
:iconmartman:
glad you liked it!! this is my most popular deviation yet, do you have any ideas on how i can animate it? i think i might do a couple (once i put a light switch in).

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If your interested in time travel, meet me last Thursday!
:iconflamezw:
Another small room eh? Much better than mine. I mean, that I could never make a gamecube that tiny and have it look like a gamecube. :P Yes, a gamecube. I've added one of those to my room since I made that piece. I still don't have cable though. :P

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~Those who throw stones... suck.~
:iconwenstrom:
Really, really well done! I'll agree with you and say that the computer is the best part of this scene. Lots of detail comprised in a very small place. Not every pixelist can pull that out without making it look practically flawless (as you did).

One thing I observed is that both walls are shaded with the same shade (or a too similar shade, I just did a nude eye comparison). I think you may want to darken one of those walls a bit, and that one will be the left wall, seeing the light source is placed at the south of this scene.

Keep up the good work! :)

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